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i like the style and the story, but it's filled with bugs. there are some screens that loop back to earlier points on that screen when you click in certain places or use the darkeye, especially on the screen with the large robot when you need to make it rust. if you click on the spray can after the water starts flowing but before you move the pipes, it activates the darkeye for some reason.
also, what is the darkeye? is it at all related to the story at this point? why does it appear now? what is FNORG and why was it in that book in the first game and in the automation's mind in this one? are these all stupid questions about irrelevant easter eggs or things that will be explained in detail in the next game?
sorry, I'm one of those nerds that play video games because I like the stories.
Author's Response:
I assure you that the next game will be better since i'm most likely to be in the groove, like I used to be...
The... Clues... Are relevant to the story.
~FNORD~
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crazymonkey games is the sponsor, not the creator. if you look at the credits you'll notice both klanis and blackmaze are listed in the credits.
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you're a great animator, you just need to get a full animation out there. there were made very well, but they didn't really have much substance to them. I'd like to see a full animation from you at some point. looking forward to whatever comes next ;)
also, if you need a storyline or combat scene, I'd love to help. I waste way more time than it's worth coming up with that kind of stuff and it really would be nice to see them made by a decent animator, and I can't do that.
Author's Response:
Yes! A great storyline is what I need!
I have sent you a PM. Thanks for a great review!!
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simple concept and good gameplay are hard to find in the same place. you've got a really good game here.
I'm not sure if this would take away from what you had in mind, but the game would have many more possibilities if it had powerups or something. as for things that could go into this game, I think that the car needs a little more power moving it. there are some levels that I get stuck in because I can't move the ball and can't get the momentum I need to push it, no matter how many times I restart (or maybe I just suck).
Author's Response:
thanks for the compliments.
I was thinking more of a simple game with no power ups or anything, just because at the moment i am concentrating on simplicity and gameplay.
All levels are possible, you just need to know how!
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that was actually just like the original show! i don't believe it, you actually made a decent live action tribute to a cartoon. good job.
Author's Response:
||X|D thank you! :3
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not great. the way it was pieced together was a little cheesy and the story as a whole kinda sucked (no offense intended). try being a little more creative with your animations, this was a little generic and way too short to be worth that much. if you need ideas for future stuff, I'm full of 'em and I couldn't animate if my life depended on it.
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it'd be nice if there were more features and stuff though. no, I haven't played very much yet at all, but it's looking a little too simplistic for my taste.
maybe a more unique level structure? I guess it's a bit late for that...
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needless to say, that was really messed up. not very entertaining either, just boring & weird. I guess that you were submitting this just for April fool's day huh?
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it would be nice if there was a strategic combat aspect of some sort, something to get rid of the wasps and stuff. it's also a little annoying to control with the mouse, maybe we could use WASD? it would also be cool to use that to slide up and down the web and swing around on it. I'm not sure how complex you're willing to make gameplay, but I really like those kinds of things and would love to see it.
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I love your animation style, very violent without overdoing the gore. glad to see a sequel too, though I'd have preferred a slightly less rushed storyline.
now for the helpful comments: the voice acting was good, but it didn't match with the text at the bottom and occasionally overlapped. it made the whole movie seem much worse than it really is :(
Author's Response:
Thanks for liking my style :D
I know there are some problems with the audio but I had MAJOR issues with it D: so that's the best I could deal with it :(
thanks for the review
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