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currently considering maybe trying to get around to starting an almost halfway decent flash movie.
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if only you had an animation idea to work off of. I don't know, something that you could animate with a storyline, perhaps involving some random NG user's idea to rip of another animation...
too bad you don't something like that :P
now for the part that's actually helpful. the animation was a little choppy and the end was kind of sudden, but it was still good. your artwork is really awesome, I get the feeling you're going to be big on NG some day in the near future.
Author's Response:
Wow thanks! I hope to be big on NG. My next animation is finished and submitted it into a collab. not sure when the collab is out though
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the game was good, but it gets boring within a few levels
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it needs work on the graphics though. I also found a glitch, nothing serious but still worth fixing. when I clicked on a spot near the center I got a popup for one of the sites common in NG ads. I assume that you never removed the button or something, but I'd suggest you take it out after we push the play button.
Author's Response:
Ah, I see, I'll fix it. Thanks.
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I'm just wondering, when you say XM2 will be an all violence movie does that mean that we won't see the ending until XM3 (if there is one)?
great storyline, congratulations on getting an average score of 9.9
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i like the style and the story, but it's filled with bugs. there are some screens that loop back to earlier points on that screen when you click in certain places or use the darkeye, especially on the screen with the large robot when you need to make it rust. if you click on the spray can after the water starts flowing but before you move the pipes, it activates the darkeye for some reason.
also, what is the darkeye? is it at all related to the story at this point? why does it appear now? what is FNORG and why was it in that book in the first game and in the automation's mind in this one? are these all stupid questions about irrelevant easter eggs or things that will be explained in detail in the next game?
sorry, I'm one of those nerds that play video games because I like the stories.
Author's Response:
I assure you that the next game will be better since i'm most likely to be in the groove, like I used to be...
The... Clues... Are relevant to the story.
~FNORD~
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crazymonkey games is the sponsor, not the creator. if you look at the credits you'll notice both klanis and blackmaze are listed in the credits.
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you're a great animator, you just need to get a full animation out there. there were made very well, but they didn't really have much substance to them. I'd like to see a full animation from you at some point. looking forward to whatever comes next ;)
also, if you need a storyline or combat scene, I'd love to help. I waste way more time than it's worth coming up with that kind of stuff and it really would be nice to see them made by a decent animator, and I can't do that.
Author's Response:
Yes! A great storyline is what I need!
I have sent you a PM. Thanks for a great review!!
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simple concept and good gameplay are hard to find in the same place. you've got a really good game here.
I'm not sure if this would take away from what you had in mind, but the game would have many more possibilities if it had powerups or something. as for things that could go into this game, I think that the car needs a little more power moving it. there are some levels that I get stuck in because I can't move the ball and can't get the momentum I need to push it, no matter how many times I restart (or maybe I just suck).
Author's Response:
thanks for the compliments.
I was thinking more of a simple game with no power ups or anything, just because at the moment i am concentrating on simplicity and gameplay.
All levels are possible, you just need to know how!
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that was actually just like the original show! i don't believe it, you actually made a decent live action tribute to a cartoon. good job.
Author's Response:
||X|D thank you! :3
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not great. the way it was pieced together was a little cheesy and the story as a whole kinda sucked (no offense intended). try being a little more creative with your animations, this was a little generic and way too short to be worth that much. if you need ideas for future stuff, I'm full of 'em and I couldn't animate if my life depended on it.
Author's Response:
Yeah... looking back its pretty bad... but it was my first. Yeah I'm bad with stories. Always murder and suicide... nothing original. :( It was short... but it was an assignment and I had a time limit. I'm still thinking about maybe doing more animations... but they are a heck of a lot of work and when I'm doing it for myself I'm a lot more critical. I get half way through an idea then scrap it. Either way... I'm going to try not to submit anymore bad stuff. lol.
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